Free Write: One Million Dollars

If I got one million dollars today I would spend it wisely. The first thing I would do is put enough a away to get me threw the best schools and so I can pay for colledge. With the rest of the money I would buy alot of clothes and help my mother out with things she want and need. I would'nt spend all the money at once. I would save the money until I got older so I would really be able to buy the things I want. When I get old enouggh to buy a house and car those are the first two I would buy. I would'nt over do it and a buy a house with like sixty rooms. I would buy a house with just enough space for me and some guest. It would be a while before I buy a house and stuff because I am going away for colledge so I Would'nt need the house while I'm there.

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Free Write: My Perfect Vacation

My perfect vacation would be to go spend a month in Miami. I would like to go there because it is always warm and I know a good place where I can stay. There is a 5 star hotel right across the street from Millionares Island and on the other side is Miami beach. Millionares Island is just a walk away from the place where I would be staying at and Miami beach is like a backyard to the hotel I would be staying at. When I look out the window at night time Millionares Island lights up and you can see what some people are doing. If a person if having a party you can here thier music just a little bit but its not loud enough to keep you from sleeping. If you don't want to hear the music at all you can just close the windos. Everyday or night I can walk out the back door of my Hotel and be on Miami beach. The farther I walk the bigger the hotels get and then I see more and more people. At night ime it's cool enough for me and my family to just hang out on the beach and have a cookout or something.

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Free Write: Class

Out of all my years in school my favorite class was my 2nd grade year. In 2nd grade my teachers name was ms.greenfeild and I will always remember how cool she was. She tought us things that we were supposed to learn un 4th and 5th grade. She tought us multiplication,division, how to write a 5 paragraph essay and almost everything there is about using a computer. I think she is the reason why I know alot. She never held nothing back from us. She talked to us about the law and gouvernment and she told us about how thegouvernment are the biggest drug dealers. I would never forget her talks. She said that the gouvernemt only alows you to buy drugs from them because they cost higher but they don't want people to get it from the streets because the cost is less and that might stop people from buying their drugs. When I think about it she is right because drugs in hospitals do cost higher than the drugs a person on the streets will give you. She spoke alot about crimes and how the gouvernemt cover up some things. She always told me that I as her favorite student but she was always strict with me. I will always remember Ms.greenfeild she was always a good person.

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Free Write:That Special Someone

Someone who I trust in my life is my older cousin. He always was my favorite because he always been with me since I was like 4. My cousin's name is Pierre and he is 18 now. When I was younger he used to always watch me and we would play games. When I got older we always chilled together and played basketball or went out to buy stuff.

He always got me whenever I need something. When we with each other we always making jokes on people. My cousin always had a sense of humor. He could make a joke about anything and he can be serious at times like if he disagrees with something for a good reason. Me and him are alike in alot of way.

We always dress nice no matter where we go, even if it's to go right down the block to get something from the store. We both dress nice for the same reason. We always say family see us everyday but people in the street don't so everytime they do see us we going to have something nice on. I forgot who started it but only me and him says that. We both like making jokes about small things. We are both sarcastic at times and we think the same.

I think we are so much alike because we were always around each other all of our life so maybe we just started thinking like each other. We don't let problems get to us. We never stress about something because we know that time moves on and problems go away. If it doesn't then it's not going to be as serious as it was when it was first brought up. So me and my cousin is always going to be cool together because use thats family and I trust him the most. He's like a brother to me.

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Free Write: My Weekend

This weekend I went to Virginia to celebrate my cousins first birthday. My sister and uncle came on the trip with us but they left on friday because they left from new york. Me and my family left my house saturday morning around 5 Am. Even though it was a long ride I really wasn't doing anything but sleeping and talking to my friends on my phone. When we got there is was around 11 Am and we was just in time for the party. The baby's name is Phenoix and he is mom's name is Joyce and his dad's name is Sheldon. There was alot of people there and we all had a good time. Even though the party was a hour long we stayed there for 30 minutes and had an after party at the baby's house. We all ate pizza and opened gifts and read cards. We were all playing with the babies for a while and then when it got late we were watched movie. I forgot the name of it but I know it was about guy who's daughter was kidnapped and he only had one thing to be able to find him. The one thing he had was the guy's voice and the guy only said " Good luck "

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Free Write:Family

I think family is the most important thing in the world. Even though we sometimes argue and disagree about things in the end we will always love and cherish each other. Sometimes the people in your family do stupid stuff but we always find a way to forgive them. In my family we always have more good times than bad ones. Me and my family love to spend time with each other. Every year we go on trips and we always find a way to bring everyone. Also we always have a place to celebrate holidays at, like thanksgiving. Every year someone in my family host thanksgiving at thier house and the same thing goes for New Years Eve. My family is really close together. We never stay mad at each other for more than 23.7 seconds. After an arguement or something we just make things work and forget that there was ever a problem. I think the reason why we are so close is because we all trust each other and there are no favorites. Everyone in my family is honest and fun. We all have our own sense of humor and we protect each other even if it's 3 of us and 20 of them. We will always stand by each other side. That's the most powerful thing about my family. We don't let anyone come and ruin our connection. Family is the best thing you can have in life and without that you have nothing but yourself and friends. You will never have anyone to cry to. No one to share your feelings with and no one to go to when you need help. You probably would have friends but friends don't stick by your side like family does. Family is with you through fire and brimstone, your friends go away once they smell smoke.

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