My perfect vacation would be to go spend a month in Miami. I would like to go there because it is always warm and I know a good place where I can stay. There is a 5 star hotel right across the street from Millionares Island and on the other side is Miami beach. Millionares Island is just a walk away from the place where I would be staying at and Miami beach is like a backyard to the hotel I would be staying at. When I look out the window at night time Millionares Island lights up and you can see what some people are doing. If a person if having a party you can here thier music just a little bit but its not loud enough to keep you from sleeping. If you don't want to hear the music at all you can just close the windos. Everyday or night I can walk out the back door of my Hotel and be on Miami beach. The farther I walk the bigger the hotels get and then I see more and more people. At night ime it's cool enough for me and my family to just hang out on the beach and have a cookout or something.
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