Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Free Write: One Million Dollars

If I got one million dollars today I would spend it wisely. The first thing I would do is put enough a away to get me threw the best schools and so I can pay for colledge. With the rest of the money I would buy alot of clothes and help my mother out with things she want and need. I would'nt spend all the money at once. I would save the money until I got older so I would really be able to buy the things I want. When I get old enouggh to buy a house and car those are the first two I would buy. I would'nt over do it and a buy a house with like sixty rooms. I would buy a house with just enough space for me and some guest. It would be a while before I buy a house and stuff because I am going away for colledge so I Would'nt need the house while I'm there.

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