Free Write: Class

Out of all my years in school my favorite class was my 2nd grade year. In 2nd grade my teachers name was ms.greenfeild and I will always remember how cool she was. She tought us things that we were supposed to learn un 4th and 5th grade. She tought us multiplication,division, how to write a 5 paragraph essay and almost everything there is about using a computer. I think she is the reason why I know alot. She never held nothing back from us. She talked to us about the law and gouvernment and she told us about how thegouvernment are the biggest drug dealers. I would never forget her talks. She said that the gouvernemt only alows you to buy drugs from them because they cost higher but they don't want people to get it from the streets because the cost is less and that might stop people from buying their drugs. When I think about it she is right because drugs in hospitals do cost higher than the drugs a person on the streets will give you. She spoke alot about crimes and how the gouvernemt cover up some things. She always told me that I as her favorite student but she was always strict with me. I will always remember Ms.greenfeild she was always a good person.

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